全通翻譯/翻譯社

原文:

本文指出了物理模型在物理學習中的重要作用，詳細論述了物理模型的建立和特徵，強調需重視物理模型在教學中的運用，以達到培養學生科學思維品質的目的。

英文

The thesis indicates the importance of physical model in physics study. It explains the foundation and the features of the physical model in details. And it also emphasizes the importance of the usage of physical model applied in the teaching process in order to achieve the purpose of training students’ quality of scientific thought．

您有看出上述英文中的問題嗎? 學術論文一般講述的是方式、方法或者規律、思想理論等內容，英文描述儘量用非人稱主語(non。personal subject)，這恐怕大家都知道，但是還有很多的小地方是很容易被忽略的。

常用於撰寫摘要的英語句型：

主題句(Topic sentence)
The purpose of this paper is...
The primary goal of this research is...
The intention of this paper is to survey...
The overall objective of this study is...
The emphasis of this study lies in...
This paper aims at providing...

支持句(Supporting sentences)
The method used in this paper is known as...
The technique applied is referred to as...
The approach adopted widely is called...
The theory is characterized by...
This formula is verified by...
The experiment used consisted of...
Experiments were performed to check...

結論(Concluding sentence)
In conclusion, …
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The results of the experiment indicated that...
The research conducted suggests that...
The findings of the research have led to the conclusion that...

瞭解了以上常用英語句型，我們可以把上面的摘要改寫為：

The object of this article is to illustrate the importance of physical model in physics study．The foundation and the features of the physical model are explained in detail. The emphasis of this study lies in the application of physical model in the teaching process in order to develop students’ ability to think scientifically.